Here are some great examples of conclusion sentences that don't just restate the topic sentence, but go beyond the topic sentence to make sure the reader ends in a new place.  That seems a lot more productive than restating the topic sentence and ending where we started.

Topic Sentence: Soccer is an awesome sport.
Conclusion  Sentence: Soccer can help me stay healthy and good looking.

Topic Sentence: Hats can express people's personalities.
Conclusion  Sentence: People can be unique and different from each other.

Topic Sentence: People should sell horses before they starve them.
Conclusion  Sentence: ...because God created horses and we need to take care of them.

Topic Sentence: Legos are fun
Conclusion  Sentence: ...when you grow up you can have a big imagination and get a good job.

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